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Post  bodysnatcher on Sun Sep 07, 2008 1:15 pm

Well i start, i just wrote this poem (in 8 min i think XD), well its absolutely related with my gf, hahaha, hope u like it:

Never Thought

As i lie here in my chair
Feeling my heart falling to death
Because u are there and I´m here
An insanity sound running in my ears

But I think I love u so much
I noticed it when I sang u Two of Us
But I still far from where u stand
My body starts to fall apart

When u said u dreamed
It made me flow in a pure stream
Sighing while u were writing
When I read I couldn’t help jumping and smiling

But the time goes on
As well as life does
But our moments together were sealed
Into the place where nothing is real
While i´ll be snoring u will be dancing
Its ok cuz I want u to be happy XD

The time will come to unseal our love
Tremendous energy would come
Meanwhile I´ll be here writing
And feeling great joy cuz your love make me happy
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Post  TrishSparda on Tue Sep 09, 2008 4:32 am

I have many poems.. but they are in Romanian Razz
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Post  Lilking on Tue Sep 09, 2008 3:05 pm

wow dangs man ur realy love sick O.O I realy thought of a poem to my gf xD chocolate and fresh rose if wat i do Rolling Eyes u mind if i steal your poem ( personal use )
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Post  TrishSparda on Tue Sep 09, 2008 4:25 pm

Lilking wrote:wow dangs man ur realy love sick O.O I realy thought of a poem to my gf xD chocolate and fresh rose if wat i do Rolling Eyes u mind if i steal your poem ( personal use )

u're so not artistic.. better find something else.. something that u've came up with.. not using others ideas Rolling Eyes
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Post  bodysnatcher on Wed Sep 10, 2008 12:28 pm

TrishSparda wrote:
Lilking wrote:wow dangs man ur realy love sick O.O I realy thought of a poem to my gf xD chocolate and fresh rose if wat i do Rolling Eyes u mind if i steal your poem ( personal use )

u're so not artistic.. better find something else.. something that u've came up with.. not using others ideas Rolling Eyes

Well done trishy u r right, everyone have their art side inside themselves, i bet u have it kingky, try it out :p, and about the poem, well go ahead and take it, but i dont recommend it, i put some own experiences there...
Well they are kinda hidden, a poem u want to dedicate must be ur own experiences no others i think...
-hugs to everyone-
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The Danm and the Sweetness Fate

Post  bodysnatcher on Sat Sep 13, 2008 11:37 am

I made another poem, well i´ve already done 4, but i like this one best...hope you do

The Danm and the Sweetness Fate

The danm fate is cursed all the way around
Danm my fate to have pulled me apart
It was so magical it was so subreal
It is hell now it will be hell for real

My eager keeps eating me
My face is full of the rage of my head
My mouth is dried without your kisses
My eyes burning from my acid tears

Your voice makes me control myself
You feed me with your sweetness voice
Sometimes sleepy sometimes tired
I wish you could be my brightness fire

And our ways are different our ways glow
You bring the sunshine into my life
Every time I think about our time
It is always random and so do I

As random as our time
Our time decided by fate
God I would say
Say that we were meant to meet
Meet and keep calling each other lovers
Lovers from sinister fate
Fate I would finally face
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Oh my god i did another One -_-

Post  bodysnatcher on Sat Sep 13, 2008 12:15 pm

Enjoy guys:

The Pain of Memories

And i feel pain in my body
The sweetest pain I could feel
The pain of my heart aching
The pain is being away from you

But my mind just brings back memories
Memories of you and me
Memories forged into my brain
Memories that I grabbed and sent to the air

I saw our photos
A fall was there
A fall that wanted to see your beauty
I was told by it in my dreams
And I brought you there my Dear

I keep rolling over
The balling roll of our lives
The memories that won´t come back
The memories that I have to find

And I have to travel to find that treasure
Nothing that cant compare with measures
It is my love my only motivation
I´m merged in that dimension

Now I still thinking I am going fast
Too fast
Too fast
Too fast that my life would break down

My Dearest thing
My Strawberry fields
My dreams
My love
Never forget this
Because I wont tear
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Post  Lilking on Sat Sep 13, 2008 3:29 pm

o.o nice and i dont have artys side i only draw paint that bout it and i am no good i paint and sketch stuff then i burn it after i dont like ppl to see my art Embarassed
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Post  bodysnatcher on Sun Sep 14, 2008 12:56 am

Lilking wrote:o.o nice and i dont have artys side i only draw paint that bout it and i am no good i paint and sketch stuff then i burn it after i dont like ppl to see my art Embarassed
Poor kingky , dont be afraid of showing urself, be real , you have to be proud of what you are, well stopping being melancholic
How has been doing my pet ??? Razz
How many ZZ asses u have killed??
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Post  Lilking on Sun Sep 14, 2008 11:12 am

ZZ asses slasyed : 1 in pvp havent went dw yet
your pet: bottomless pit it eats ration as if its drinking water but i RAWK wit 69 str gona be slasher i think if i am rite ill need 110-120 M xD
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Unkown Sin

Post  bodysnatcher on Tue Sep 23, 2008 11:35 am

Unknown Sin

I saw you today in your shadow cape
You were governing mystical lands
Your beauty made that night bright
With your touch you cleaned their hands

And I was like a Christian
Taking my cross in my back
Feeling hard what I am
Grateful for your commands

Initial despair
I feel going to the hill
Where you didn’t find your king
But you where there surrounded by the air

You looked at me with your cute eyes
And offered me a reward
I dropped over and cried
And I blessed our God
You sent you’re your angel to me
My wishful dream






Now your attached to my love
And I am slaved by your chains
And I hope together and ever
We gonna carry that weight

The sins of our love
Are being payed now
Still I need to wait
Painful and eternal days

My dreams wont be broken
Cuz our souls have been chosen
To rule over our world
From our sinful love


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Without You tonight

Post  bodysnatcher on Tue Sep 23, 2008 11:36 am

Without You tonight

Everybody hurts when someone is missing
Everybody knows when to stop seeking
But I just made to have the suffering
Feel the pain of not having you tonight

I am strictly demented
Regardless of any respected
But just bowing my head
Thinking on the pain ahead

But is going to be an endless night
Because you are not coming tonight
It hurts yes it hurts
Patient I yelled to myself

Your memories in my mind saved are
Your voice in my heart lies
Your touches in my skin are burned
The pain from you hurts
The darkest night I would have
I will make it bright with you in my mind
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Post  Lilking on Tue Sep 23, 2008 2:42 pm

oky man seriously wer the hell are you getting all this stuff Mad
man dont make me fly over ther and lock you in ur room for a week -.- slow the Fark down writing 2 poems like that >.> you think the last one could get me an A in English?
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Post  bodysnatcher on Wed Sep 24, 2008 4:04 am

Lilking wrote:oky man seriously wer the hell are you getting all this stuff Mad
man dont make me fly over ther and lock you in ur room for a week -.- slow the Fark down writing 2 poems like that >.> you think the last one could get me an A in English?

ahahahhahaha, i have 5 more, got the lyrics for a song and other 4 written in spanish, well if my poems gets u A in school its ok, but at least quote me, and tell them you kinda translate or get the ideas from a peruvian writer Razz; and i´m traveling this thursday to Arequipa the place where my lady lives, and gonna print these poems and give her them all, i just gave her 7 by attaching to mails, i have saved like 8 more for this kinda of book or poemary... Well i found another hobby after TOP and i´m also rly liking it, and that is writing!!! ^^... take care kingky or shall i say Steve Very Happy
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Post  Lilking on Wed Sep 24, 2008 3:38 pm

shhhhH!!!!!!!! -.- thats it i am so flying over ther now
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Post  bodysnatcher on Wed Sep 24, 2008 9:07 pm

hahahaaha, -hiding "funny" stuff before kingky arrives- lol :p
Well here another poem :p

Doubts

Doubt like when turning right or left
Doubt like when committing a theft
Doubt like when eating this or that
Doubt like while writing this down

Doubt like when loving or not
Doubt like when you look into the coat
Doubt like when shivering from the cold
Doubt like when shooting to your foe

Doubt like when triggering the gun
Doubt like when praying for the act
Doubt like when teasing your folk
Doubt like when kissing your love

Doubtless I was
When I told you to become one
Fearless of the risks
Fearless of the fears

The time is getting me down
And letting you down cuz of your doubt
I pray for both of us
For the time we would come back

But the doubts will always be
The scars in our tears
The magical illusions my dear
The sweetest pain of our deal
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Post  Lilking on Thu Sep 25, 2008 1:30 pm

erm sugestion just move towns and move 2 her town Cool then will u stop feeding me wit poems seriously man i am starting 2 get sick of A in class =P
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Post  bodysnatcher on Thu Sep 25, 2008 1:51 pm

Lilking wrote:erm sugestion just move towns and move 2 her town Cool then will u stop feeding me wit poems seriously man i am starting 2 get sick of A in class =P

hahaaha, well i know man, but need to get more money for that, its no that i can salvage gems or farm story quests to get money u know, Razz
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Post  Lilking on Thu Sep 25, 2008 5:11 pm

u never now shit happends u might walk up 2 some random old man and he will be like go kill 20 shrubs n weeds in his back yah wit garden fork for 80,000
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Post  bodysnatcher on Fri Sep 26, 2008 5:14 am

lol, well gonna travel for the weekend, here i let a poem so u dont miss me =P:

Unknown Sin

I saw you today in your shadow cape
You were governing mystical lands
Your beauty made that night bright
With your touch you cleaned their hands

And I was like a Christian
Taking my cross in my back
Feeling hard what I am
Grateful for your commands

Initial despair
I feel going to the hill
Where you didn’t find your king
But you where there surrounded by the air

You looked at me with your cute eyes
And offered me a reward
I dropped over and cried
And I blessed our God
You sent you’re your angel to me
My wishful dream

Now your attached to my love
And I am slaved by your chains
And I hope together and ever
We gonna carry that weight

The sins of our love
Are being paid now
Still I need to wait
Painful and eternal days

My dreams won´t be broken
Cuz our souls have been chosen
To rule over our world
From our sinful love
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Post  Lilking on Fri Sep 26, 2008 12:13 pm

yay my name is in ther did you see it Very Happy
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Post  Greencheese on Sat Sep 27, 2008 8:45 am

OK since yall are posting poems, hears an insulting one i heard

Roes are red , Violets are blue
Sugar is sweet, You can be too
but you roses are wilting, you violets are dead
you sugar is lumpy, JUST LIKE YOUR HEAD

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Post  Lilking on Sat Sep 27, 2008 11:34 am

-wipes lil tear from eye- beautie body you can learn a thing or two from Cheese
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Post  Naeryan on Sat Sep 27, 2008 10:52 pm

Greencheese wrote:OK since yall are posting poems, hears an insulting one i heard

Roes are red , Violets are blue
Sugar is sweet, You can be too
but you roses are wilting, you violets are dead
you sugar is lumpy, JUST LIKE YOUR HEAD


lol nice poem greencheese
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Post  bodysnatcher on Wed Oct 01, 2008 2:45 am

Lilking wrote:-wipes lil tear from eye- beautie body you can learn a thing or two from Cheese

hahahaha, yahoo!! i´m back
and with a lot of love in my heart
Ready to write more love poems,
I could even write a short story, u may get surprised

Razz
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